Run 1: full run

Fri 6 Nov at 18:3012 slidesLeadership team
13:05
3:05 over your 10:00
3.0
your first full run

Slide by slide

PlannedActualOver

Open a slide to see what you said on it.

Scores

Opening3
Message and ask3
Structure and flow3
Slide coverage2
Timing1
Audience fit4
Delivery5

Pace 155 words a minute · 17 fillers (1.3 a minute) · no long pauses

Your one fix for the next run

Cut slide 4 back to its point. That alone saves about 2:10.

Say slide 4 in three sentences, one per bet. The story of how you chose them can wait for a question. Then give the ask its full minute, with both hires in it.

To get inside 10:00
  • Slide 4Drop the eleven ideas and the workshops. Keep one sentence per bet. Saves about 2:10.
  • Slide 2Stop after the 41% to 58% and the drop in support calls. Saves about 0:30.
  • Slide 5Leave the cost detail for questions. Saves about 0:20.
Your opening, rewritten from your own words

Good morning. In Q1 we want every payment to work first time, and today I’m asking you to approve the roadmap and two new hires to deliver it. Six weeks ago we took payment completion from 41% to 58%. Here’s how we build on that.