Run 3: full run
Yesterday at 12:4012 slidesLeadership team
Slide by slide
PlannedActualOver
Open a slide to see what you said on it.
Scores
Opening
4
Message and ask
3
Structure and flow
4
Slide coverage
3
Timing
2
Audience fit
4
Delivery
5
Pace 155 words a minute · 17 fillers (1.5 a minute) · no long pauses
Your one fix for the next run
Cut slide 4 back to its point. That alone saves about 1:40.
Say slide 4 in three sentences, one per bet. The story of how you chose them can wait for a question. Then give the ask its full minute, with both hires in it.
To get inside 10:00
- Slide 4Drop the eleven ideas and the workshops. Keep one sentence per bet. Saves about 1:40.
Your opening, rewritten from your own words
Good morning. In Q1 we want every payment to work first time, and today I’m asking you to approve the roadmap and two new hires to deliver it. Six weeks ago we took payment completion from 41% to 58%. Here’s how we build on that.